This made me wet.
This made me wet.
Canned Cameo
For placing Canned in the background, my good sir. You get madfives.
Love your work.
You have joined the ranks with Toastedtoastytoast and the KK Yellow Cat of people I don't want to see at the bar.
Glad you appreciated the joke dude.
Sigh ...
You'd think that eventually people would get tired of "picking on" the new crew.
If you were a legit member, which obviously you're not, I would tell you not to submit this and actually develop a plot, first and foremost. Then I would tell to work on the voice acting and actually make some color coordination.
Nobody wants to watch some stupid spazzy dance routine.
I tried to get some input, but the forum was down.
You said to become a member we had to develop a soup character, make a flash that flashes, and come submit our application.
I developed plum soup, and a flash that passed, and as soon as the forum is back up I'll be submitting my application. Sounds like its gonna be denied, sadly...
Rather decent, my minion.
You're getting better, squire. Now, make something a bit longer, and keep it up. Told you, frame-by-frame looks the best.
:D I love you!
Not too bad
Yes, this was pretty good. It has room to be fixed up, I say. The art was rather nice, the animation was decent - yet, it could to stand for some improvement; the voice acting wasn't too shabby, but I don't think you really intended for your narrator to stutter, that could be improved, Kilik is listed to have a voice actor, your audio file for him didn't go through - fix that up. You also have an interesting choice of design here.
Over all, nice job, but you got some improving to do.
On the narrator I did intend for him to stutter. For when I produce later animations for this series he is a character that lives in Heleminst and stutters. Yes somehow Kilik's voice was shifted to only come through one speaker and I didn't realize till it was too late and the audio corrupted itself. :/
I do still have improving, but I have to start somewhere and I wanted to post it up and get some criticism back to help me improve. Thank you for your comment~
I find it really funny.
Look, man, the animation is cool, especially for Navi. The graphics are awesome, and the music has a nice choice. My only complaints are:
A. Sound effects for the plane crash.
B. The reuse of the arrow shooting animation.
But those are more small things.
Dude, you're too modest. TOO modest.
You would be the type of person that I would team up with if I was a better animator and actually had some credibility.
Man, you are a good designer. You did an awesome job and you continue to do an awesome job.
Whatever score you get you deserve.
If nothing else, I'm voting five just to piss you off.
Yeah, I just didn't wanna waste time looking around for some kind of glass smashing/explosion sound effects, and I don't like using the ones that have been used in hundreds of animations... gets pretty dull hearing those all the time. I should've tried to make them sound better, though.
Could be butter, but ...
Hey, I personally liked it. Jokes were rather good. However, the animation and audio was rather ... uh, messy. But defiantly has a lot of potential!
Just keep on practicing.
Maby I need a new mic, and I might try to fix the audio later.
Nice.
I still think Pokemon is still a fad - not sure.
You did very well with the animations and your drawing styles are excellent. The sound effects were great and your choice of music is pretty good.
All 'round I give ya a 10 in the review and a five in the vote. You been saved. Like you didn't think you would.
:D
Thank you, amigo, I appreciate it.
But yeah, I could see where whether Pokemon still being a fad or not is still debatable. But thanks for the review.
Short and sweet
Well animated, good joke, and it steps away from a stick stereotype.
Nice.
Lots of love.
Its interesting how I have good animating skills but bad drawing skills so I stick with stick figures.
Hmmm ...
Nice animation, decent comedic tone (the irony of all things), graphics are good. A bit short, but I think there's a little message to it.
At any rate it's pretty good. Nice job.
Aye, I wanted to make it longer but it's due tomorrow and I wasn't sure how long it would take to add some of the other stuff I had in mind. All in all I'm happy with it as a completed assignment.
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